Ill be posting the colored one tomorrow. Sorry about the hand writing...never really been good at it haha. Me and my friend Evan Maroun are going to be making are own comic...may not be the best in the world but whatever it will be fun.
Hey there Jayson. Great start to this comic. Take a look at Coleen's most recent post, she put up some interesting comics that she follows and they have some great layout. This is what I think you need to work on, more dynamic composition. Have some panels zoomed WAY in and others WAY out. Double spreads, interesting shapes and typed out text bubbles. Don't be afraid to "borrow" layout and composition from existing comics that you like.
allright. yeah i really liked that one she posted with the cats. yeah now that i look at my comic strip and comics i own i wish i could go back and change some things.
oohh how interesting! I love it! Got a good story behind it :D
ReplyDeletethank you haha
ReplyDeleteHey there Jayson. Great start to this comic. Take a look at Coleen's most recent post, she put up some interesting comics that she follows and they have some great layout. This is what I think you need to work on, more dynamic composition. Have some panels zoomed WAY in and others WAY out. Double spreads, interesting shapes and typed out text bubbles. Don't be afraid to "borrow" layout and composition from existing comics that you like.
ReplyDeleteallright. yeah i really liked that one she posted with the cats. yeah now that i look at my comic strip and comics i own i wish i could go back and change some things.
ReplyDeleteDon't bother going back and changing. It's done deal, move forward and make more. Make lots more!!
ReplyDeleteok haha. like i said me and my friend are coming up with an idea that we are going to work on
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